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Logbook feedback

Discussion in 'General Discussion' started by Spruijt, 8 Jan 2013.

  1. Spruijt

    Spruijt Real men wear clogs
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    I'm currently writing a logbook for my English class, and was wondering if anyone could give me some feedback on it.

    So if you are interested in spending a few minutes reading the logbook and checking my spelling and grammar, please give me a shout and I'll send you the file.

    Thank you in advance.
     
  2. Slaine

    Slaine Serious Gamer
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    I'd be happy to help!! :thumbup:
     
  3. SHROUD

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    Often review docs in my role so happy to help if you want it?
     
  4. Martok

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    Spelling and grammar pedant reporting for duty, sir! :lol:
     
  5. Jkrohn1

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    I was waiting for you to turn up :D
     
  6. Acegadgets

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    I'm geet lush at Inglish dispite gettin and unclassified "o" Level grade wen i was at scool . So Im always happy 2 help a forin M8 get betta at his gramma and stuff.
     
  7. Slaine

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    Martok, this looks suspiciously like txt spk. VERBOTEN!!! ;)
     
  8. Jkrohn1

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    That's how he actually speaks in the real world :D
     
  9. SHROUD

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    He speaks? :o I thought he was a quiet chap ;) .
     
  10. Spruijt

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    Slaine beat you to it, but thanks anyway matey :thumbup:
    You too Shroud.

    It isn't a highly complicated piece of text, but nevertheless I wanted to get all the mistakes put right. Slaine did a great job.
     
  11. Jkrohn1

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    How will you learn if you get others to do your work? :P
     
  12. Martok

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    Ah, now you think that Slaine has done a great job, but he may have told you some untruths. Remember the dirty Hungarian phrasebook...

     
  13. SHROUD

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    You do know Slaine used to write for Beadle's About ;) .
     
  14. Slaine

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    In all fairness there wasnt a great deal to do. It was all pretty top notch anyway. You'd be hard pressed to guess that Spruijt was dutch sometimes. Its only the clog, cheese, weed and hardcore porn that gives him away
     
  15. Spruijt

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    Well Martok, Slaine's suggestions were in perfect English. Just not the type I understand: ;)
     
  16. Martok

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    Ah I see, Spruijt. Slaine is also a member of the society of the mispronunciation of words.

     
  17. Spruijt

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    Officer Crabtree in Allo Allo springs to moond with that scotch. :D
     
  18. Martok

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    Good moaning!

     
  19. Spruijt

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    Got a scare of 93 on my lagbook and exam. Thanks a loot Slaine for your hip. My English is getting butter by the dew :thumbup: With some more practise you wound even be anal to tell I'm from Holland at all.
     
  20. Jkrohn1

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    Wow I can weely sea huw wel du lesons are teach you
     
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